Blog 7

My paper is going pretty well with some minor problems. The length is the only problem that i truly need to work on but it is fixable. I need to do more research which will lengthen the paper. In my introduction i need to been define my thesis. I also need to state the soultion of the problem throughout the paper. I need to make sure that the paper stays in the same tense. I need to further discuss net and search neutrality so the reader fully understands that major point made in the paper. I need to go into more depth which will add the length that i need. I need to research and find at least one or two more sites.